hey I wrote another poem that is how the first song was made and to me is very profound can you put music to it you are allowed to change the words not the message: To be above everything & everybody no one to yell and scream no pain no tears with that comes no laughter to be heard no joy to see kinda bland it might seem to some but numb to me is just fine by me In my own world "Rayne's world" Only what I allow in is what I see what you see is what you get Simplicity, serinity, Drama free I sit here and look @ some strange man I see the man I once loved ever so to find out later I was manipulatedby power and privledge that he claimed was as useless as a used up placenta that has gracefully fallen to the ground. I look into this stragers eyes but it is not he that I see I see what i once called peace I don't know whether to run to him or from him
Manon Swafford
-- Edited by Manon on Wednesday 14th of July 2010 07:20:25 PM
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Hey Manon! deep.....I am taking my laptop to our new house this weekend and outting on headphones and see what kind of feel i come up with for 'choices".got my equipment out there.Once I find a groove then I'll have to see how I get it accompanied to the track..Glad you are working on stuff instead of stuff working on you!!!:) love the photo,beautiful...thanks.....i'll be in touch.hope your pain feeling little better.......Commander CODY and his lost planet airmen signing off!!.
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