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Post Info TOPIC: Raman I need your sax for this one see what you can do?


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Raman I need your sax for this one see what you can do?


hey I wrote another poem that is how the first song was made and to me is very profound can you put music to it you are allowed to change the words not the message:
To be above everything & everybody no one to yell and scream
no pain
no tears
with that comes no laughter to be heard
no joy to see
kinda bland it might seem to some
but numb to me is just fine by me
  In my own world
"Rayne's world"
Only what I allow in is what I see
what you see is what you get
  Simplicity, serinity, Drama free
I sit here and look @ some strange man
I see the man I once loved ever so
to find out later I was manipulatedby
power and privledge that he claimed was as useless as a used up placenta that has gracefully fallen to the ground.
I look into this stragers eyes but it is not he that I see
I see what i once called peace
I don't know whether to run to him
or from him


Manon Swafford









-- Edited by Manon on Wednesday 14th of July 2010 07:20:25 PM

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Hey Manon! deep.....I am taking my laptop to our new house this weekend and outting on headphones and see what kind of feel i come up with for 'choices".got my equipment out there.Once I find a groove then I'll have to see how I get it accompanied to the track..Glad you are working on stuff instead of stuff working on you!!!:) love the photo,beautiful...thanks.....i'll be in touch.hope your pain feeling little better.......Commander CODY and his lost planet airmen signing off!!smile.

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smile   Manon , That is a great poem,it has feeling . It would make a good song also.  smile

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Hi Manon,,
sorry for not responding earlier.

I like the lyrics, straighforward and true,,

Been to three cities blowing sax and now that Im back home will certainly get a tune in...

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